Sunday, February 19, 2012

3rd Six Sentence Sunday

Continuing the fun with Austin and Jamie in this week's Six Sentence Sunday.

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Her thoughts turned elsewhere as his lips came close, touched hers. It was the briefest of touches, not even a real kiss, but her stomach turned into a wild horse stampede. Her hands hung by her sides, useless. Her eyes fluttered shut and she stood still as a dress mannequin.
Then, just like that, it was over.
He pulled back, leaving her desperate for more.

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31 comments:

  1. That was a great first kiss. I love her reaction!

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  2. Nice first kiss. This is another where I wish there was more than six sentences. :)

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  3. "her stomach turned into a wild horse stampede." Perfect for a novel set in the west.

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  4. I think it left us the same way!!! Love it!

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  5. Really nicely done six! I totally sympathize with her.

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  6. Nice first kiss but what a way to leave her... more :) Great 6

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  7. She's not the only one left desperate for more. ;-) Great six!

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  8. I think we're all desperate for more! Hot kiss! Great tease, D'Ann!

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  9. I love this: but her stomach turned into a wild horse stampede.

    Excellent six, my friend!

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  10. I love this kiss... Great emotion!

    Great six, D'Ann...

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  11. Great sentences D'Ann what a tease. Thanks for sharing.

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  12. Uh oh, she has it bad already! Love her reaction.

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  13. Love the comparisons you make in your writing. This was most enjoyable.

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  14. Now leaving a woman hungry and desperate for more just isn't nice. It's wicked. Very nice six. Thanks for sharing.

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  15. Great first kiss. She wants more of the kiss and we want more of the story. Wonderful six!

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  16. Sweet first kiss! Can't wait for next weeks six! :)

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  17. I just love your descriptions! Wild horse stampedes INDEED!

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  18. Stacey~
    Thanks so much!

    Lia~
    That's nice of you, thanks!

    Kylie~
    Thanks! I try to use metaphors that match the characters.

    Jenn~
    Thanks so much!

    Carrie Ann~
    Thanks bunches!

    Jessica K~
    Thanks a lot!

    Anya~
    Thanks a lot!

    Brandi~
    My daughter's name! Thanks a ton!

    Angela~
    Next week! Thanks!

    Jenna~
    Thank you for coming by!

    Brenda~
    I try to use mets I relate to.

    Sara~
    I hate kissing scenes, so thanks for liking.

    Kathy~
    Thank you very much!

    Vivien~
    Thank you for coming by!

    Cate~
    Yeah, Jamie's in love. TY!

    Ginger~
    TY! I'm a new fan of yours.

    Kathryn~
    Thank you so much!

    L.M.~
    Thanks tons!

    DeeAnna~
    Love you name! Thanks for dropping by!

    Silver~
    Thank you, I know another Silver, too.

    Sheri~
    Hi, buddy. Thanks for droppin' in.

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  19. Wow, nice first kiss! Loved the imagery with the 'wild horse stampede'. Great six!

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  21. Gayle~
    I appreciate it. Thanks!

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