Continuing the fun with Austin and Jamie in this week's Six Sentence Sunday.
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Her thoughts turned elsewhere as his lips came close, touched hers. It was the briefest of touches, not even a real kiss, but her stomach turned into a wild horse stampede. Her hands hung by her sides, useless. Her eyes fluttered shut and she stood still as a dress mannequin.
Then, just like that, it was over.
He pulled back, leaving her desperate for more.
I love comments, thank you!
That was a great first kiss. I love her reaction!
ReplyDeleteNice first kiss. This is another where I wish there was more than six sentences. :)
ReplyDelete"her stomach turned into a wild horse stampede." Perfect for a novel set in the west.
ReplyDeleteLove, love it, D'Ann!! Great story and six!
ReplyDeleteI think it left us the same way!!! Love it!
ReplyDeleteReally nicely done six! I totally sympathize with her.
ReplyDeleteNice first kiss but what a way to leave her... more :) Great 6
ReplyDeleteShe's not the only one left desperate for more. ;-) Great six!
ReplyDeleteI want more too! Nice 6!
ReplyDeleteI think we're all desperate for more! Hot kiss! Great tease, D'Ann!
ReplyDeleteI love this: but her stomach turned into a wild horse stampede.
ReplyDeleteExcellent six, my friend!
I love this kiss... Great emotion!
ReplyDeleteGreat six, D'Ann...
Great sentences D'Ann what a tease. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLove the gentleness, well done!
ReplyDeleteUh oh, she has it bad already! Love her reaction.
ReplyDeleteLove the comparisons you make in your writing. This was most enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteNow leaving a woman hungry and desperate for more just isn't nice. It's wicked. Very nice six. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGreat first kiss. She wants more of the kiss and we want more of the story. Wonderful six!
ReplyDeleteSweet first kiss! Can't wait for next weeks six! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery! Nice six today. ;)
ReplyDeleteI just love your descriptions! Wild horse stampedes INDEED!
ReplyDeleteStacey~
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
Lia~
That's nice of you, thanks!
Kylie~
Thanks! I try to use metaphors that match the characters.
Jenn~
Thanks so much!
Carrie Ann~
Thanks bunches!
Jessica K~
Thanks a lot!
Anya~
Thanks a lot!
Brandi~
My daughter's name! Thanks a ton!
Angela~
Next week! Thanks!
Jenna~
Thank you for coming by!
Brenda~
I try to use mets I relate to.
Sara~
I hate kissing scenes, so thanks for liking.
Kathy~
Thank you very much!
Vivien~
Thank you for coming by!
Cate~
Yeah, Jamie's in love. TY!
Ginger~
TY! I'm a new fan of yours.
Kathryn~
Thank you so much!
L.M.~
Thanks tons!
DeeAnna~
Love you name! Thanks for dropping by!
Silver~
Thank you, I know another Silver, too.
Sheri~
Hi, buddy. Thanks for droppin' in.
Wow, nice first kiss! Loved the imagery with the 'wild horse stampede'. Great six!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sadie!
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet!
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ReplyDeleteLisa~
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Excellent! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteWonderful snippet!
ReplyDeleteSharon~
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
Gayle~
ReplyDeleteI appreciate it. Thanks!