Sunday, February 26, 2012

4th Six Sentence Sunday

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From my untitled WIP Austin's POV:


Very carefully, Austin sat his beer on the bar. Then he struck. One lightning-fast blow to Carver’s chin that sent the overweight man reeling backward off the barstool onto the floor. He bounced like a big rubber ball, once. Then he lay still.
And moaned a curse.


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44 comments:

  1. Nice six. Makes me want to know what Carver said or did.

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    1. Thanks, Lia. He was rude to the heroine, of course!

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  2. Nice action description! What the heck did Carver do?

    (FYI-blogspot has a kink in their code that doesn't show the Captcha code for WordPress users, so I can't log in that way and then have to try alternatives. You might consider turning off Captcha on Sundays-- you might get more comments...)

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    1. Hi, Angela.
      Thanks, I'll try to figure out how to turn that off.

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  3. Nice! Now what did Carver do to deserve that? LOL

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    1. Thanks, Carrie Ann! He was a very bad boy, of course!

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  4. Love the image of him bouncing like a big rubber ball! Priceless! Love this six!

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  5. Love the word choice- "struck" in one sentence and then "lightening-fast."

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  6. Did I tell you I was in love with Austin, lol! Fantastic six, friend! Send me more of this one soon!

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    1. Jennifer~
      You always make me feel so good!

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  7. One lightening-fast blow to Carver's chin!
    Good job,
    Neecy

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    1. Neecy~
      Old Austin doesn't waste a lot of time talking about it.

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  8. YEAH..loved the action D'Ann...nicely written :)

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  9. LOVE the action. I also love how he set his beer down all calm like, then struck!

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  10. LOTS of action in those six sentences! Love the bouncing ball image.

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  11. Nice action! It had me laughing that he bounced like a rubber ball lol.

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  12. Oooh, you definitely caught me in the action! Great job!

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  13. Lovely. Please tell me this is the start of a brawl!

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  14. Great tension with the punchy (uh, pun intended) sentences. Very nice six!

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  15. I was so glad Austin sent Carver flying!

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  16. Love it! I can definitely picture that. I especially loved the last sentence. It had a lot of punch, no pun intended!

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  17. Oh, loved the action.

    Maggie O'Malley

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    1. Hi, Maggie!
      Thank you for coming by!

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  18. Nice six - I'll be back to catch up

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  19. Oh, I really do love Autin!! Great six, my friend... And when are you sending me MORE!!!!

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  20. LOL! I love the image of him bouncing like a rubber ball. Excellent six!

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