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From my untitled WIP Austin's POV:
Very carefully, Austin sat his beer on the bar. Then he struck. One lightning-fast blow to Carver’s chin that sent the overweight man reeling backward off the barstool onto the floor. He bounced like a big rubber ball, once. Then he lay still.
And moaned a curse.
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Nice six. Makes me want to know what Carver said or did.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lia. He was rude to the heroine, of course!
DeleteNice action description! What the heck did Carver do?
ReplyDelete(FYI-blogspot has a kink in their code that doesn't show the Captcha code for WordPress users, so I can't log in that way and then have to try alternatives. You might consider turning off Captcha on Sundays-- you might get more comments...)
Hi, Angela.
DeleteThanks, I'll try to figure out how to turn that off.
Nice! Now what did Carver do to deserve that? LOL
ReplyDeleteThanks, Carrie Ann! He was a very bad boy, of course!
DeleteLove the image of him bouncing like a big rubber ball! Priceless! Love this six!
ReplyDeleteLOL. Thanks!
DeleteHe bounced... love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Daryl!
DeleteLove the word choice- "struck" in one sentence and then "lightening-fast."
ReplyDeleteKylie~
DeleteThanks!
Did I tell you I was in love with Austin, lol! Fantastic six, friend! Send me more of this one soon!
ReplyDeleteJennifer~
DeleteYou always make me feel so good!
One lightening-fast blow to Carver's chin!
ReplyDeleteGood job,
Neecy
Neecy~
DeleteOld Austin doesn't waste a lot of time talking about it.
YEAH..loved the action D'Ann...nicely written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Christine!
DeleteLOVE the action. I also love how he set his beer down all calm like, then struck!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brenda!
DeleteLOTS of action in those six sentences! Love the bouncing ball image.
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by, Silver.
DeleteVery nice, D'Ann!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jerri.
DeleteNice action! It had me laughing that he bounced like a rubber ball lol.
ReplyDeleteThanks, DeeAnna!
DeleteOooh, you definitely caught me in the action! Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi, Zee! Thanks for coming by!
DeleteLovely. Please tell me this is the start of a brawl!
ReplyDeleteLOL. No, no brawl!
DeleteGreat tension with the punchy (uh, pun intended) sentences. Very nice six!
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DeleteI was so glad Austin sent Carver flying!
ReplyDeleteHey, Shawn!
DeleteMe, too!
Love it! I can definitely picture that. I especially loved the last sentence. It had a lot of punch, no pun intended!
ReplyDeleteCaryn! Hi!
DeleteAre you a SSS?
Oh, loved the action.
ReplyDeleteMaggie O'Malley
Hi, Maggie!
DeleteThank you for coming by!
Nice six - I'll be back to catch up
ReplyDeleteHi, Sue!
DeleteThanks so much!
Oh, I really do love Autin!! Great six, my friend... And when are you sending me MORE!!!!
ReplyDeleteAh, Sara!
ReplyDeleteYou made my night!
LOL! I love the image of him bouncing like a rubber ball. Excellent six!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sharon!
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