Saturday, February 11, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

This is my 2nd week playing SSS, and it's a lot of fun. For more great snippets, go to http://sixsunday.com/ and check it out!

This is from my current ms, titled just Austin for now.

This is in Austin's POV,thinking about Jamie.

Sheriff English wasn’t his partner, he reminded himself. She was his boss. His very young, very attractive boss. One who didn’t have a clue what she was up against.
Unlike Mandy, who’d lost her life to the drug runners who outfoxed her, Jamie was an innocent with no one to watch her back.
Except him.

56 comments:

  1. Good snippet! By the way, Branded sounds like a very intriguing book. It should make a sale.

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  2. Nice snippet D'Ann...always love reading in the heroes POV :)

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  3. Very nice six! Can't wait to read more. :)

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  4. Cool. This is going to be a great story.

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  5. I can't wait to read more on these two! Hehehe

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  6. Very good six! I would buy and read more.

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  7. Oh okay - now I want to read the whole book. You hooked me!

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  8. Nice snippet! Love conflicted, chivalrous men :)

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  9. Great six. You packed a lot in there to intrigue the reader.

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  10. Thanks, Jacqueline! This is the follow-up book to Branded.

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  11. Thanks, Liz! Couldn't do it without you and the other WWs!

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  12. Thanks, Christine! I love a hero's POV, too!

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  13. Thanks, Jerri! I appreciate that, and am anxious to see more of yorus.

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  14. Thanks, Sheri! If I could only get some more written!

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  15. Thaks for coming by, Stacey! That's nice of you to say!

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  16. Carrie Ann~ Wow, what a nice thing to say. Thank you!

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  17. Thank you, LM! Appreciate that!

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  18. Fantastic six, D'Ann. I love your writing style and voice.

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  19. I love Austin.... Great 6, D'Ann

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  20. Thanks, Sara. I like him, too.

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  21. Someone to watch your back - just the kind of hero I love. Great hook D'Ann :)

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  22. Ah, chivalry is always a must in a good hero. Sounds like he's a keeper.

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  23. Ah, I see a knight in shining armor in her future..the question is, will she let him be? Considering her job, probably not. :D

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  24. Hi, Jessica. Thanks for coming by!

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  25. Hi, Monica! He's driving Jamie nuts right now!

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  26. Hi, Dakota.
    Nope, Jamie's not leaning on anyone!

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  27. Wow definitely a grab the book to read more. THanks for sharing it with us. Good luck and may the writing goddess bless you with more sentences to finish the book.

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  28. I love that he's prepared to watch out for her. Gotta love a strong, protective man! Great six :)

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  29. Thank you, Kathy! I hope I can finish this book!

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  30. Thanks, DeAnna! I love protector heros!

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  31. Methinks Austin will be the one to watch her back. :)

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  32. Sounds like he's going to take on the role of watching her back!

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  33. Aw, let's hope he takes care of her!

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  34. Thanks, Gemma! He's going to give it a hell of a shot!

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  35. Thanks for your help on this chap, Sharon!

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  36. Me thinks Austin is my kind of guy. Great six.

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  37. Love that last line, love him and love this story!! Send me more :)

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  38. Thanks, Jenn. Getting some done today!

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  39. I'm late but I'm here! Austin sounds protective and interested. I like that in a hero! Great six, D'Ann!

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  40. Jenna! You came! I was missing you so much. Thanks for coming.

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