Saturday, April 7, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday Burn

Hi, everyone.

This is from an old manuscript called A Real Bad Burn.

In the hero Kelly's POV:

The sensation of her warm, wet tongue on him sent a shudder through him. God, they had been good in bed. His balls tightened. He could come in a minute. His cock jerked. No, not with her, and not like this.

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45 comments:

  1. do u have newsletter and blog i can get by email, email me at k527@msn.com, name is karen

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    1. Wow, what a nice compliment, but no, I don't. Sorry. Please come by again.

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  2. You know, most guys don't wait until balls tightening and wet tongues are applied to decide they don't want to come with someone, LOL.
    Great six!

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    1. True, that is true. He is kind of assualted here.

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  3. LOL, I'm with Tempeste here -- I bet he wouldn't be able to stop then! Very vivid description. Nicely done.

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    1. LOL. He...um...finishes it himself.

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    1. Thanks, Kristi! Maybe someday I can finish this story.

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  5. Interesting 6, D.
    Now I want to know more about this old manu of yours...

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    1. LOL. Thanks. I think it's still up on Critters...in the inactive folder.

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    1. Breeeeennnnddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! You came to see me. Thank you!

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    1. Daryl! Awesome to see you here. TY

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  8. Oh, wow, very hot! I wasn't expecting that, LOL.

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    1. Thank you, Christine. Thanks for coming by!

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  10. Lol, good luck in holding back, boyo. ;) Fun six, D'Ann.

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  11. Very well done very nice very hot. Go go go!

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  12. I'd sure like to read more of this story. What you have here is great!!

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    1. Thanks, Miz Sheri. I know what to bring over to Friday Flames.

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  13. Still want you to finish this story!! Great six!

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  14. Wow, pretty hot and steamy. Great six!

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    1. Thanks, Karen. This whole book is steamy. The hottest one I've written.

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  15. Umm... what is her tongue touching? Because if they are naked, then I think he's changing his mind a little too late. ;) Hot six, D'Ann!

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    1. LOL her tongue is touching what you think it is...and he has a real hate on this woman...she is basically attacking him.

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  16. Ooh damn I wanna read more! Hot!

    Nichelle

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  17. You know my thoughts on RBB! And this great six just proves my point! Finish the damn book! LOL Love you and it, D'Ann.

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    1. Ah, Jenna. You made my night. Love ya back.

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  18. Very hot, and very intriguing too!

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    1. Zee! So good to see you. Thanks for coming by.

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  19. Thank you, all, for coming by. I so apprecaite it. I think I made it by everyone's blog, except Zee, and I need to go there. Let me know if I didn't.

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  20. Wow! That sort of sums it up for me. :)

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    1. LOL, Ginger. Is that a good wow, or wow, this is horrible? hehehehehe.....

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